Proposal Presentation

Had my proposal presentation today, it went well I felt.  I feel like I had some good feedback to give further depth to my design.  I need to integrate all the elements to create a more well rounded experience, where the user becomes immediately immersed in the feeling of insomnia... I like the idea of creating a hallucination within the mirror and also maybe using the heartbeat to correlate directly to the user in the space, so it's an instant connection.